Gleefully- When I think of the world gleefully I think of bright happy things, fun and skipping. I could have just used the word happy, but I feel it just doesn't cover it. It wouldn't have been as strong.
Putrid- The word putrid makes me think of rotten milk or something to that effect. I can just imagine gagging at the horrible smell, when the word is used. I don't think there is any stronger word than putrid when it comes to smell.
Shriek- When I think of a shriek i don't think of a full on scream. To me it's more of a quick, high pitch scream, almost like a dog yelping except more intense.
MY GROUPP!!!
(Google reader shuts down my internet so I only got a chance to see Jessi's cause I know her url by heart<3)
JESSI:
Glacial- I really liked this word, when Jessi used it I could imagine bitter, cold eyes locking in eye contact and staring at you
Piercing Shreik- this word really appealed to my sence of hearing as well as sight. I could hear Jessi screammmm so high pitched and loud that it was painful to hear.
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Thanks Bianca,
My comments are the same as Jessi's. I like how you decided to go with dialogue, but I think some narration with descriptive words might have added a lot. For example, you could have provided context by saying something about your relationship with your mother so we have a better idea about the cause of your rage.
Mr. J
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