Wednesday, February 7, 2007
2/8 Descriptive Writing Assignment
We were picking up speed, going faster and faster. An object appears in the road. It was a man. His innocent face shining in the car headlights, moving closer and closer. There was no warning of the terrible fate coming to him. We were gaining even more speed; we must have been going at 130mph at least. My heart was racing, almost as fast as the beetle. Adrenaline pumping through me. The man realized the beetle speeding towards him and began to sprint towards safety. He stumbled in the streets trying to avoid death. My eyes began to grow as the man was hit and lay flat in the streets like road kill. It was a hit and run. We didn't know if he had a wife, children, anything. We just ran him over and that was that.
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I really really like this. Its very descriptive. You used a ton of great descriptive words. But my one question is, what put of F451 was this based on?
Thanks for the comments Jessi. I'm wondering what words in particular you found to be descriptive.
I also have the same question as you about what part of F451 this is from. I think it's from the perspecitve of the kids in the car who almost ran down Montag, but I'm not sure.
Mr. J
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